Vertrouwen (Trust)


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kassari

Posted 13 February 2008 09:45 (Post #42519)

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Vertrouwen

Vrouwen zijn dom en mannen zijn niet serious
Zegt hij

Ze verstaat niet wat hij zegt

Ze vertrouwd hem en lacht

Ze heeft gelijk

Hij maakte maar een grapje

translation:
Trust

Women are stupid and men are not serious
He says

She does not understand what he says

She trusts him and laughs

She is right

He was only joking

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Posted 13 February 2008 23:38 (Post #42591)

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Very nice . . .

Nir_

Posted 13 February 2008 23:40 (Post #42592)

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I love this one.

And it rings true to life as well...

KatieHunter

Posted 15 February 2008 10:30 (Post #42672)

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i would have chosen this one as a winner. it is great, bert. thanks- mb and katie and hunter

Nir_

Posted 15 February 2008 10:45 (Post #42673)

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I love this one as well. Very well written, and actually made me think.

kassari

Posted 15 February 2008 12:36 (Post #42680)

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Thanks for this encouraging feedback!

I also like it myself (which is not always the case) and will try to continue writing in my own voice

By the way: this one was drafted in norwegian

Congratulations to the winners and all other gloets!

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