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Posted 11 February 2008 09:33   (Post #42329)


 

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Me and you

Dust and dirt?
I don't care.
Me and you, we are looking at rainbow.


Birds are ashamed

Birds are ashamed.
The only sound I hear
Is your magic voice.


Colours

Nights are depressing
Without you.
Bring me the colours.


A dream

I woke up:
That was a dream.
I am falling asleep to see you again.


Life?

Tears of suffering.
If LOVE = LIFE,
I am not alive.


I am alone...

Sky is dark.
Another falling star.
I am alone again.


Winter

Flowers died.
Spring turned back to winter.
Love is gone.

Posted 11 February 2008 15:39   (Post #42370)


 

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very poetic!

Posted 11 February 2008 16:33   (Post #42377)


 

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Certainly 10 points for trying to put your name right up there in our minds E! ;-) J.

Posted 12 February 2008 15:16   (Post #42461)


 

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Minda (11/02/2008)
very poetic!


thank you ))
honestly, It's a pleasure to read such a response...


JulianT



Posted 13 February 2008 23:48   (Post #42594)


 

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Short but very sweet

Posted 16 February 2008 10:03   (Post #42712)


 

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That was great, Extremal,

A poem sculpted out of rock, with exquisit chunks of words !

Massively delicate !

great !

Ken


Posted 22 February 2008 18:19   (Post #43024)


 

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Translator, Ken - thanks very much for the feedback!

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