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Looking for glocalers who indulge, enjoy and collect these joys from Japan... haikus, senryus and wakas. Feel free to send me a private message. Or share it here and let every one enjoy your favorites.

There is some disagreement as to what the real difference between these is. Here is what I consider as the difference - Haiku generally is a structured poem about nature, physical reality and about the world outside of us. Senryu is a poem that distills our feelings, the world inside of us and poetically presents heightened human self-awareness. Waku is a short structured poem covering variety of subjects. Some rhyme, most don't. Often they have a mathematical structure 5/7/5 ons, or 5/3/5, or 5/7/5/7/7 etc.

The difference between haiku, senryu and waka does not matter to me really... I like them all... Japanese or Chinese equivalent or any other source. I find some simply humorous. Some silly and cute. Some of them are the most serene representation of human experience and communication. High art.

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Looking for glocalers who indulge, enjoy and collect these joys from Japan... haikus, senryus and wakas. Feel free to send me a private message. Or share it here and let every one enjoy your favorites.

There is some disagreement as to what the real difference between these is. Here is what I consider as the difference - Haiku generally is a structured poem about nature, physical reality and about the world outside of us. Senryu is a poem that distills our feelings, the world inside of us and poetically presents heightened human self-awareness. Waku is a short structured poem covering variety of subjects. Some rhyme, most don't. Often they have a mathematical structure 5/7/5 ons, or 5/3/5, or 5/7/5/7/7 etc.

The difference between haiku, senryu and waka does not matter to me really... I like them all... Japanese or Chinese equivalent or any other source. I find some simply humorous. Some silly and cute. Some of them are the most serene representation of human experience and communication. High art.
coloradoJul 31, 08 09:04

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Thanks isa413. Here are a few more...

*****

is it forever and ever
that he hopes our love will last
he did not answer
and now my day light thoughts
are as tangled as my hair

-Ms. Horikawa

*****

my love, is there any way
except by a messenger
to send these words to you?
if I could, I'd come to you
to say goodbye, forever

-Fujiwara

*****

when I think
about the misery
of those in this world
their sadness
becomes mine

-Ryokan

*****

cold winter morning, chilling wind
white snow drifting
standing alone, I feel peace

*****

calm lac leman, white swans
towering jet d'eau
look ma! a baby shouts

*****

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Thanks isa413. Here are a few more...

*****

is it forever and ever
that he hopes our love will last
he did not answer
and now my day light thoughts
are as tangled as my hair

-Ms. Horikawa

*****

my love, is there any way
except by a messenger
to send these words to you?
if I could, I'd come to you
to say goodbye, forever

-Fujiwara

*****

when I think
about the misery
of those in this world
their sadness
becomes mine

-Ryokan

*****

cold winter morning, chilling wind
white snow drifting
standing alone, I feel peace

*****

calm lac leman, white swans
towering jet d'eau
look ma! a baby shouts

*****
colorado, Jul 31, 08 11:33

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Haiku du lapin



platane meurtri

seul dans un rayon de lune

un enjoliveur



:D
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Haiku du lapin



platane meurtri

seul dans un rayon de lune

un enjoliveur



:D
Casuistik, Jul 31, 08 13:45
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