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Hello ,


 


Can  a english native speaker tell me if this sentence is correct: 



Holder of a degree in commerce and administration, I acquired during my career, solid skills in the management of various administrative tasks. At ease with computer tools, I am a hardworking person, organized and able to manage multiple tasks.


 


Thank you very much in advance; 


 


Best regards


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Hello ,


 


Can  a english native speaker tell me if this sentence is correct: 



Holder of a degree in commerce and administration, I acquired during my career, solid skills in the management of various administrative tasks. At ease with computer tools, I am a hardworking person, organized and able to manage multiple tasks.


 


Thank you very much in advance; 


 


Best regards



lise lJul 20, 2023 @ 09:35
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Maybe you want to rewrite it.



With a degree in commerce and administration, I have developed strong skills in handling diverse administrative responsibilities throughout my career. I am proficient in using computer tools and consider myself a hardworking and organized individual capable of effectively managing multiple tasks

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With a degree in commerce and administration, I have developed strong skills in handling diverse administrative responsibilities throughout my career. I am proficient in using computer tools and consider myself a hardworking and organized individual capable of effectively managing multiple tasks


hashmat h, Jul 20, 2023 @ 15:49
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Hello ,

 

Can  a english native speaker tell me if this sentence is correct: 

Holder of a degree in commerce and administration, I acquired during my career, solid skills in the management of various administrative tasks. At ease with computer tools, I am a hardworking person, organized and able to manage multiple tasks.

 

Thank you very much in advance; 

 

Best regards


Jul 20, 23 09:35

Please check your Inbox  for a personal message.


R.

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Please check your Inbox  for a personal message.


R.


Ritchie, Jul 20, 2023 @ 23:57
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Thank you so much

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Thank you so much


lise l, Jul 22, 2023 @ 08:34
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