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Jul 10, 2011 @ 21:08

I am just finishing a new website for McSorleys Pub (Geneva's Hockey Team's bar) and trying to find and mistakes. I had 2 weeks to complete the website and was studying for over 8 hours a day doing an intensive french course.

I still have to do the English translations for the events but before I meet with the client I want to try to get rid of as many errors as possible.

Its a simple design but as the saying goes "Too err is human, but to really screw up you need a computer..." and as its a website it has a lot more chances for me to screw up.

So any thoughts & opinons would be appreicated, and yes I realised this a very cheeky post , but this is going to be part of my new portfolio in my ongoing efforts to find some fixed work.

The website address is : http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch

Thanks all

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I still have to do the English translations for the events but before I meet with the client I want to try to get rid of as many errors as possible.

Its a simple design but as the saying goes "Too err is human, but to really screw up you need a computer..." and as its a website it has a lot more chances for me to screw up.

So any thoughts & opinons would be appreicated, and yes I realised this a very cheeky post , but this is going to be part of my new portfolio in my ongoing efforts to find some fixed work.

The website address is : http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch

Thanks all

Chris PettipiereJul 10, 2011 @ 21:08

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Jul 10, 2011 @ 21:30

pls give me an email address where i can send the corrected pages

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pls give me an email address where i can send the corrected pages

hay_, Jul 10, 2011 @ 21:30

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Jul 10, 2011 @ 22:59

I still have to do the English translations for the events but before I meet with the client I want to try to get rid of as many errors as possible.

Its a simple design but as the saying goes "Too err is human, but to really screw up you need a computer..." and as its a website it has a lot more chances for me to screw up.

So any thoughts & opinons would be appreicated, and yes I realised this a very cheeky post , but this is going to be part of my new portfolio in my ongoing efforts to find some fixed work.

The website address is : http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch

Thanks all

Jul 10, 11 21:08

Will do... same request as Hay...

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Will do... same request as Hay...

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Jul 10, 2011 @ 22:26

Here we go:

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/sports/categoryevents/1.html

Le pub est un véritable "sport's bar", dans la plus pure tradition nord-américaine. Le pub Il dispose également d'une terrasse de plus de 200m2 équipée également de deux écrans de télévision,

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/evenements/categoryevents/2.html

…écouter un de nos DJ ou groupes Live live ou simplement profiter d'un succulent délicieux (succulent does not apply to drinks) cocktail…

Vérifiez Consultez le calendrier ci-dessous

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/manger.html

I would avoid the mix between French and English in the titles.(Summer menu but Salades faîcheur) Titles in English are OK for an English Pub J

(pépites de fruits doux garnies de fromage crémeux)

L'assortiment de tapas tex-mex assortis

Assiette de Crudités du marché

Salade César au Poulet (notre spécialité estivale) - 16 à 20

Salade du jour accompagnée de sa garniture du grill (demander au service)

Gaspacho Andalou de la maison

Brochette de saumon à la sauce curry et curry (twice curry ?)

Penne all'arrabbiata

Afin de former le palais de nos futures générations d'Aigles, pour les enfants en dessous de 10 ans, la plupart de nos plats sont disponibles en portions junior

Salade des steppes landaises (landaises is an adjective in this case è no capital)

Une salade du sud-ouest aux magrets séchés et gésiers confits, saupoudrée de morceaux de pommes et de fruits secs.

Travers de porc caramélisés

Légumes asiatiques et pommes cuts (what did you want to say ?)

Semoule à l'orientale et tajine de légumes Tajin

Filets de perches en fritures, sauce tartare Pommes cuts et salade verte

After Work Evening sur la terrasse du McSorley : Cocktails, bar à apas, music cool, démo dance salsa & country dance

Menu du jour - 22 (plat & dessert)

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/adresse.html

Comment arriver chez nous.

En voiture:

Tournez à droite sur le Quai des Vernets. Après 300 m, au rond-point, prendre la 3ème sortie sur à gauche la Rue Hans Wilsdorf. Destination sera Le pub se trouve tout de suite sur la droite. Le stationnement est Des places de parc sont disponibles en face du centre sportif (Parking de la piscine des Vernets).

En bus:

Prenez le nombre de Bus 11, arrêt « Vernets ».

Trams 15 ou 17 arrêt « Industrielle », puis tournez à gauche sur le Quai des Vernets. Après 300 m, au rond-point, prendre la 3ème sortie sur à gauche la Rue Hans Wilsdorf. Destination sera Le pub se trouve tout de suite sur la droite.

Cheers, François

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Here we go:

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/sports/categoryevents/1.html

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/evenements/categoryevents/2.html

…écouter un de nos DJ ou groupes Live live ou simplement profiter d'un succulent délicieux (succulent does not apply to drinks) cocktail…

Vérifiez Consultez le calendrier ci-dessous

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/manger.html

I would avoid the mix between French and English in the titles.(Summer menu but Salades faîcheur) Titles in English are OK for an English Pub J

(pépites de fruits doux garnies de fromage crémeux)

L'assortiment de tapas tex-mex assortis

Assiette de Crudités du marché

Salade César au Poulet (notre spécialité estivale) - 16 à 20

Salade du jour accompagnée de sa garniture du grill (demander au service)

Gaspacho Andalou de la maison

Brochette de saumon à la sauce curry et curry (twice curry ?)

Penne all'arrabbiata

Afin de former le palais de nos futures générations d'Aigles, pour les enfants en dessous de 10 ans, la plupart de nos plats sont disponibles en portions junior

Salade des steppes landaises (landaises is an adjective in this case è no capital)

Une salade du sud-ouest aux magrets séchés et gésiers confits, saupoudrée de morceaux de pommes et de fruits secs.

Travers de porc caramélisés

Légumes asiatiques et pommes cuts (what did you want to say ?)

Semoule à l'orientale et tajine de légumes Tajin

Filets de perches en fritures, sauce tartare Pommes cuts et salade verte

After Work Evening sur la terrasse du McSorley : Cocktails, bar à apas, music cool, démo dance salsa & country dance

Menu du jour - 22 (plat & dessert)

http://www.mcsorleys-pub.ch/fr/adresse.html

Comment arriver chez nous.

En voiture:

En bus:

Prenez le nombre de Bus 11, arrêt « Vernets ».

Cheers, François

Free, Jul 10, 2011 @ 22:26

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Jul 10, 2011 @ 23:11

Filets de perches en fritures, sauce tartare Pommes cuts et salade verte

don't you mean "cuits" ?

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Filets de perches en fritures, sauce tartare Pommes cuts et salade verte

don't you mean "cuits" ?

epicure, Jul 10, 2011 @ 23:11

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Jul 10, 2011 @ 23:18

oops, i meant "cuites"

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oops, i meant "cuites"

epicure, Jul 10, 2011 @ 23:18

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Jul 11, 2011 @ 13:48

Thanks guys

I will apply all these corrections to day.

Keep them coming!

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Thanks guys

I will apply all these corrections to day.

Keep them coming!

Chris Pettipiere, Jul 11, 2011 @ 13:48

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Jul 11, 2011 @ 16:31

If you still need help after the corrections, I'll be glad to assist. Also, if you need an extra pair of hands to meet your deadline --with either the English or French versions-- do let me know by writing to my mailbox.

bon courage!

Sary

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bon courage!

Sary

nomades, Jul 11, 2011 @ 16:31

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Jul 11, 2011 @ 16:31

Hi Chris,

I red your summer menu...may I help you in correcting some mistakes?

Starters Tapas / Entrée Tapas

Burritos Salsa Caliente 5 pièces 11.--

Aiguillettes de poulet

Salade fraìcheur

Salade César (Caesar) aux poulets Is in the salad more than one variety of poulet?? I think the Caesar salad is only made with chicken..so I think you have not to mention chicken...

E la nave va...

Penne all'arrabiata

Nos fameux burgers

US classic: oignons

Desserts

Crême brûlée

Tarte Tatin (I think you have to mention the fruit only if it is not made with apple)

Daily specials

Travers de porc caramélisés

Penne sautées à l'ail

Semoule à l'orientale et Tajine de légumes

Filets de perches (it is not necessary to mention friture..the filets are always fried or cooked in butter.) sauce tartare, pommes cuites (do you mean steamed patatoes?) salade verte

Voilà..

Bonne chance for your new portfolio!!

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Hi Chris,

I red your summer menu...may I help you in correcting some mistakes?

Starters Tapas / Entrée Tapas

Burritos Salsa Caliente 5 pièces 11.--

Aiguillettes de poulet

Salade fraìcheur

Salade César (Caesar) aux poulets Is in the salad more than one variety of poulet?? I think the Caesar salad is only made with chicken..so I think you have not to mention chicken...

E la nave va...

Penne all'arrabiata

Nos fameux burgers

US classic: oignons

Desserts

Crême brûlée

Tarte Tatin (I think you have to mention the fruit only if it is not made with apple)

Daily specials

Travers de porc caramélisés

Penne sautées à l'ail

Semoule à l'orientale et Tajine de légumes

Filets de perches (it is not necessary to mention friture..the filets are always fried or cooked in butter.) sauce tartare, pommes cuites (do you mean steamed patatoes?) salade verte

Voilà..

Bonne chance for your new portfolio!!

Marce, Jul 11, 2011 @ 16:31

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Jul 11, 2011 @ 21:44

I am going to have a busy night and it shows that my french still sucks but I will be in another intensive french course in august so I have a chance to improve.

Thanks to all that have sent me corrections.

Chris

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I am going to have a busy night and it shows that my french still sucks but I will be in another intensive french course in august so I have a chance to improve.

Thanks to all that have sent me corrections.

Chris

Chris Pettipiere, Jul 11, 2011 @ 21:44

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Jul 14, 2011 @ 12:09

hello...

Any of you kind people have some spare time to help translate a page from Eng to French for me pretty please?

If you can help, could you e mail me your address so I can send the document.